I was worried about the amount of tension throughout the story, but it seemed like the class enjoyed it. I want to really refine the story as a whole and go through making sure I’m not over describing certain events or scenes in the story. I also need to clarify the abuse she witnessed during her childhood because some of the readers thought that her dad was abusing her instead of her mom. Some of the readers were also curious about the timeline so I need to verify subtly how long they have been together. I’m thinking that I’ll describe an image when Hazel is cleaning up the shards of glass. Another suggestion that was brought up was knowing what happens to their relationship in the end, whether or not they end up together again. I think I’m going to keep the ending open for the reader to interpret, but the way it’s ended somewhat describes that they remain strangers.