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Month: April 2023

Remote Learning Journal Entry

Even though I am not actually taking quotations and citing them in my project, they are still useful for my overall project. I use them as a way to improve my writing and create a stronger storyline. They provide me with ways to create a character, develop a storyline in a proper arc, and it gives me guidelines on dialogue or setting. These are all things that I struggle with that these books help me sift through. When it comes to the actual short stories, they inspire me and provide me with key traits that show what makes a good author. These texts allow me to connect with my characters and develop well thought through settings. They also allow me to feel confident in my writing and what I am putting out there. I think the best way to see this influence is the way that Hazel has changed between the first story and the second one. I’ve been really trying to use my books to push me to create a stronger, revised draft. 

I do respect and admire the texts and writers I deal with. Mary Gaitskill has become a huge factor in my references and resources. Her writing is impeccable and deals with some serious topics like I want to do with my writing. She also intertwines flashbacks seamlessly in her work as well which is what I’m trying to do. I hope that that admiration and respect is evident in my own work. I do think that my prose conveys the attitude towards the texts and I do think I see a maturity in my work. I don’t think I have been taking my writing as seriously as I am write now and I think I owe that to my resources that I am using for this revision project. 

Journal #8 (LIL 420)

“These characters who are not fundamentally good should also be rendered with multiple facets. Bad guys aren’t bad every single second of the day. Sometimes, they’re just hanging out eating their take-out Chinese food, or waiting in line with their car at the carwash, or even doing something kindly, like helping an old lady pick up apples that have fallen from her grocery bag” (Gorham’s Writing Fiction)

Not 100% sure how I’m supposed to analyze my sources since most of them are not countering or forwarding specific topics but more so provide guidance for writing or are actual short stories. Gorham Writing Fiction takes a different approach to creating and developing characters. Most guidance books tend to teach you about focusing on a sole character’s key traits, which is super important, but Gorham wants you to take a pros and cons approach. In order to create a strong character, you need consistency. Unlike Gorham, I suggest that you start with the key traits of the character first. Focus on the overall character traits, keep your character consistent throughout the story. Making a rough draft first and putting your character in key scenarios to see how they would deal with the issue or setting. Once you have your character developed, you need to figure out whether they are a main character or a side character. After that decision has been made, then you can introduce the technique from Gorham’s Writing Fiction. You also need to ensure that those traits are introduced in a timely manner, and they align to what they normally stand for. They shouldn’t be so out of pocket, so when you introduce new character traits like helping an old lady pick up apples for a bad guy character, you need to make sure that he still holds a grudge about it. Or at least ensure that the soft essence has an explanation as it would be a sharp contrast to his overall harsh demeanor. 

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