For this speech, things were a little tricky. How do you really explain why you should pass a class? Overall I think I used good evidence and story telling to convince the audience. I think my eye contact is very strong, but I think I stumbled over my words a bit due to the pressure I was feeling behind the speech. However, I do think there’s a lot of emotion and realness in my tone. When I say I’m going to take what I learned in this class with me throughout my future experiences, I’m not joking and I think the audience can tell that. I did speak with my hands a lot and I don’t know if that’s a distraction or helps prove my emphasis, so I’m hoping for some feedback on that. I think the organization was good for the most part, talking about the last 6 weeks, what I learned, how I improved, the help from peers, etc. I know though that it could still use some work and there’s always room for improvement. However, I’m glad with how this speech turned out.